Reviews of free sci-fi with titles beginning with T
*** Sex = 2, Action = 5, Prose = 7
As a story, this is good. If that was all it was, it's worth reading. There's a lot of astromomical and astrophyical science in this that might be a little shaky but that isn't the point. The plot is a bit similar to Les Broad's 'Aupes' but this is MUCH more believable, much better plotted, uplifting instead of desperately depressing and fun to read in most spots. A man from Earth reaches an alien planet that is all but destroyed by an asteroid impact and helps them recover and start a new community. It is not the events that make this so completely the opposite of Aupes, but the way the story is told. It is not that the prose is better, it is because the heartwarming moments are in the story as well as the heartbreaking.
This book is supposed to be about the autistic and the normals. He's got a type of humanoids with tails that use them to communicate something about their emotional state, and other humanoids who have excellent engineering skills but are unable to speak or reproduce. Being a medical professional I'm sure Charles knows that autism is a failure of the 'mirror neurons' which are used to generate an internal copy of the thoughts and emotions of those we communicate with. He is using the fact that such people usually become 'things' people who work with their hands, write code, or other endeavors that involve working with objects and not with people. Unfortunately people on the autism spectrum are too varied and the symptoms too diverse to capture in a story where so few of the 'fixers' personalities are examined in any detail.
All the stories of Kassidor are really about autism, because they are written by an autistic author who cannot do justice to a character who is not somewhat autistic. They are slanted strongly toward my own particular symptoms, a complete lack of interest in competeing for social position (status), an overdeveloped sense of fair play and a complete lack of ability to deceive or detect deception. Others with the disorder are totally amoral or even cruel. Many are too withdrawn to interact with the world. Some have extremely limited intelligence, some have exceptional intelligence and most are of average intelligence. The disorder comes in different levels of severity from 'a bit shy' to some who can babble on for hours when no one is interested. Many are unable to hold a job, date, or manage their affairs. Some live a semi-normal life but alone. Some are happier alone, some wish they had the social skills to have friends, spouses and families. Most are hidden in plain sight. They appear fine from a distance and only by knowing them can you tell something is off.
Deep Autism is a crippling disorder, but milder forms have been survivable until now. The reason for the difficulty today is that one must have MUCH MUCH MUCH more social skill to get a decent job today than in the past. Once the job is won, it takes much more social skill today to do most good jobs than it did in the past. A position where one can just sit at their desk and write code is much rarer today, because the actual code writing is done by machine. The same can be said for assembly line jobs, machinist jobs and many others that allowed people who were unwilling or unable to play politics to make a living. Today just about anyone with even a toe on the autism ladder will have enormous difficulty getting any job at all, and find it nearly impossible to get a job sufficient to support a home and family.
Another difficulty, the smart phone. Autistic people are not at a particular disadvantage in using a smart phone because all the non-verbal ques are missing in communication via text. What is problematic however is what the smart phone's effect will be on the life and learning of autistic people. The disorder is not a simple matter of nature, there is a big nurture component to it. I went thru most of my life not knowing I had it, not knowing what it was, but knowing I was not acceptible socially to most people. The point is, without a smart phone or virtual world to crawl into I had no choice but to tough it out as best I could. I know for myself if I'd had the virtual world to fall into, I would have never done that and I fear many others are doing that today. It is our loss, as we are losing the 'fixers' in this story, those who do the 'things' work in our society.
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*** Sex = 2, Action = 5, Prose = 9
I'm sure this book was a lot of fun to write. Being granted super powers, being put in command of the world, able to remake it to your own liking, being young again, getting fawned over by pubescent women, who wouldn't enjoy it? Effortlessly vanquishing all foes, including former generals, gaining new super powers without effort, as required, all that just has to be a trip. Anyone who writes creates their own world, some write mainstream where the changes from present day reality are small, some write wild fantasy where none of the laws of physics still apply and most are somewhere in between. We Sci-fi writers are near the outer edge in the liberties we take with our worlds.
This is a post apocalyptic tale, in this case the apocalypse is the Earth passing thru some kind of rift in space where the laws of physics are transformed into laws of magic. In the process almost all of humanity dies. Some of the survivors mutate, filling the role that zombies take in most post-apolcalyptic stories. This is about rebuilding the world using the laws of magic instead of physics, but it is the same problem faced in all stories of this type, getting civilization going again and dealing with the violence that the lack of law enforcement brings about.
It is as violent as 'Wanted' by Jason Halstead or 'Hawk's Legend' by Robert A.J. Turnbull Jr. but not as bloody. Only a couple of the good guys die, but thousands of the enemy. The only sex in the story is never consumated. Most characters and settings are a bit thin but not enough to be a problem. Many readers will be glad not to get lost in too much detail. The proofreading is generally very good, but there are places where we change point of view without even a blank line.
The intellectual points made in this are that many people today are raised with no intent to be productive members of society. All they want to do is watch TV. That was true in the past but he's dating himself saying that, the current generation has little use for TV. He seems to favor plantation style agriculture instead of personal farms, but that could be just because he's trying to employ thousands of people with no farming skills. I know exactly how frustrating it can be to try and raise food when you don't know how. He was a child of the 60's but still fears 'drugs' and doesn't differentiate between them.
He also makes a good point that people just can't believe the United States is gone. We are all having a hard time believing it in real life. It would be much easier to beleive if 99.99% of the population had died and nothing worked any more. It is much harder to believe when the Roberts court has quietly sold our once-great nation to the corporations where it will be slowly digested over the next hundred years.
While I disagree with some of his points (I think most people would be glad to contribute to society if they were allowed), and I think the main character's powers were somewhat over-the-top and arbitrary, it is actually fun if you take it for what it is. Fans of Ayn Rand will probably like it a lot.
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Guest Review by Roger Zuidema
Tangle in the Dark gets the award for the most alien alien. A 1400 x 900 light year, quantum space, dark matter creature, or feral OS as Ava puts it, using bacteria to 'upload' souls at death. I know that there are a lot of people who like, or need to have, all of the questions answered at the end of the story. However I really like it that all of the questions were not answered. In fact there are a lot of unanswered questions. Is the Wetat God? I assumed not, however there is another question on whether or not this creature/OS was invented by God as the mechanism to bring people to heaven. In the real Christian version the Wetat would best correlate to Hades (not Hell). Hades is actually a Greek invention as a place where the dead go, however Christians used the word to mean that place where souls go waiting for the final establishment of God's kingdom as in Revelation chapter 21. That would make Wetat God's construct or creature to do this. However this could also fit with a lot of other religious traditions, from a great many pagan religions with multiple gods. (Wetats) Or the native American style nature based religion that teaches that all things have a spirit. Where the spirit in this case is the planet wide soul eating bacteria, this would assume that not only humans would be transferred, but also higher animals. Personally I don't see any reason why they wouldn't be. I assumed that the animals in Atlantis were not simulated but were transferred just the same as the humans. By the estimated numbers of souls talked about, it was not only humans or life forms from Earth but many other planets. Its too bad that they were kept separate, or were they? I'm also assuming that there is more than one Wetat, so I'm not really calling that an unanswered question.
Another question, is it a naturally occurring creature or a construct of a higher being (not necessarily God). Ava assumes that it is an OS but she could be a bit biased because that is what she is used to. This brings up the question of, if it's a naturally occurring creature, why would it collect souls? It would be assumed that the creature would have to benefit from collecting souls. Do the indwelling souls somehow provide the creature with some form of life force? If it was a construct (OS) then the answer is more obvious, it was designed that way, but then the question is why would the designer want to do that. Unless the designer is God and has a special interest in his creation (Intelligent life). Another question that I had from the beginning was, is Kassidor real. That question is kind of indirectly answered in the epilogue where Desa comes back to Alan. The assumption I had was that Kassidor is real and Alan just made a copy, including Desa. Of course that brings up to more questions. If Kassidor is real I can understand why they and/or Alan would not want the rest of the crew to know. However, did the Kassikan reprogram Alan into thinking that Kassidor civilization died out thousands of years ago, or did Alan do it himself to keep Gordon's Lamp from taking over? In this case Alan would be making a huge sacrifice to keep Kassidor out of their hands, to not harvest Kassidorian souls in other words.
To me it seemed like the epiphany point happened rather quickly, I had to reread that section to fully get it. Also to me a human constructed heaven is obviously not the real one. However I also know that there is no shortage of deceived religious fanatics who can be duped into believing just about anything. Once that happens to a charismatic leader he has no problem collecting followers no matter how irrational his ideas. It actually seemed to me that the theologians on Gordon's Lamp were fairly reasonable and tolerant as religious leaders go. It would seem to me that Bishop OíConner would have had to have had a previous crisis of faith in order to be that open to the revelation that their heaven was no better than that of the Wetat. I would have liked to have seen that in the story, but in all honesty, I don't think I would have known how to write it. It is suggested in the story but I thought it was pertaining to Captain Kelvin not the Bishop. With everything that they had been through it would have been easy to assume that any and all of the 'faithful' could be questioning their faith. When someone says crisis in faith there are three levels. First one's personal relationship to God. Most true believers if they are honest with themselves have at least a few of these. The next is their church's or belief system's relationship to the true God. (How trustworthy is your religion.) These are less frequent but happen. Most people change churches at this point, or like Martin Luther create a new religion. The big one is when one questions the existence or nature of God. (this is not the same as questioning God.)
This is only one of a number of open ended stories that leave behind a lot of interesting possibilities. This one caused a lot more thought than most however. Many do have to do with left behind artifacts, because for me they automatically provoke any number of possibilities. Although as I said, a fifth order condensate dark matter feral OS has to be the most interesting so far. Even more interesting than the ancient Krell replicator with a telepathic user interface that caused so much trouble in Forbidden Planet.
I kind of thought that this was part of the Expedition story line, which therefore answers some but not all of the Kassidor questions. And then Tangle in the Dark answers one of the left over questions from Tdeshi Quest. What ever happened to Gordon's Lamp and the other Ava? If there was one.
I realize that both O'Conner and Rendellyn are not main characters and therefore there is no need to go into great depth on their journeys, I guess I just identified with that a little more because I'm familiar with the concept of spiritual claustrophobia, or the need to try to fit God into a box small enough that we can understand and control him or her. But that was one of the big thought messages I got from Tangle. That God is bigger than we perceive him to be. This was not a revelation for me, but it was nicely portrayed in the story. One of the advantages that I have had in my Christian journey is that I have always known that my perception of God is not the same thing as God. Although I can't know what is in the heads of other Christians, many seem to act as their perception of God is God, and therefore to question their perception is to question God. Not only do I believe that my perception could be wrong, by definition I know that it must be wrong. Therefore for me a crisis of faith is not a question of God's existence it is a question of my ability to know who he is, while knowing that the best that I can do is to continually correct the model with new data. However this does come with a price in that the only God I have any hope with is one with the capacity to forgive my shortfall, because there is no way that I could fool myself into thinking that I measure up.
Iíve written all this and realize Iíve covered only the Christian aspects of this story and not said a word about the plot, the science or any other aspect of the story, although the science did get me watching a few Roger Penrose lectures from you-tube. Mainly thatís because the theology is the part that meant the most to me. Maybe someday youíll get someone else to write something about the other aspects of this book.
I know some day I will need to read the Second Expedition because that seems to make up the center of the Kassidor universe, although it seems like a pretty daunting task. Or maybe I'm afraid that it will answer too many questions. Kassidor is very big compared with the normal scifi planet, to me it seems very open ended and I like it that way.
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**** Sex = 1, Action = 6, Prose = 7
This is a large and ambitious project, and one that is pulled off fairly well. This seems to be intended as another Dune, Book of the New Sun or Hyperion. The canvas is broad and deep, there are many threads of action, a large cast of important characters, an alien and a plot against the throne of the Empire. There is a petty local tyrant (Cheney?) ruling a land significantly called Newusa, and a revolutionary movement to oppose him. The main character is an archeohistory professor and swordsman that remined me a bit of Severian in 'Book of the New Sun' though he is not as deep, as dark or as introspective. Like Severian he is cast into action way over his head, but in this it takes much less time for him to get into it.
The setting is the Galactic Empire when it is 1.6 million years old and unites over two million planets. Most of the action takes place on Mars after it has been terraformed, and Earth has been rendered uninhabitable. It has the feel of about 2800ad and not over a million years in the future. The only way I could make this fit in my mind is if the Empire has already existed for a long time and we havn't discovered it yet. How the other two million planets got inhabited by today's humans (not Homo Erectus) is a mystery still. All in all the story has the feel of 2800ad. or so and not an age so far in the future that we would not be able to understand the characters or the action. To be fair, Book of the New Sun by Gene Wolfe was also set in the very distant future, but had the feel of being in about the same time frame as Dune. If any descendants of humans are alive in one point six million years they will be more like the Pronna in The Secret of Mount Traygol and be almost impossible to translate into something we can understand.
The main character, Professor Benjamin Hillar is the only one developed in any depth, but this story is more driven by plot and action than character development or setting. You do not have the lavish development of setting and culture that you do in Dune, Hyperion or Book of the New Sun or even The Second Expedition. That is not to say the setting and culture is lacking, it is at least as well done as the other four star novels I've reviewed, and nearly as well done as In Her Name - Empire.
The story is written as Sci-fi, not fantasy, but the science is not front and center. There is standard Empire-era weaponry, compatible with action in the 2800's to maybe the time of The Aldeb Wars. The technology in use is noticeably earlier than that in Dune, maybe even prior to interstellar travel.
The prose and proofreading are a shade below professional. There's missing quotes and things of that nature, but spell check has been run and the errors are rare enough that I did not find them a distraction to the reading. The prose itself is light and folksy, not as challenging as Frank Herbert's or Gene Wolfe's, but not juvenile either.
This is a long book, nearly the size of The Aluminum Quest so you have to spend some time with it. It is also the first of a trilogy, and the other two are $2.99 each. The other two are not quite as long. I will not review the others because they aren't free, but I'm going to assume they are worth the price. I've paid good money for a lot less than this.
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*** Sex = 5, Action = 4, Prose = 9
The link that leads to this actually leads to 'The Terran Empire Series' of which this seems to be near the middle. The plot starts as a battle between a human empire and a group of terrorists. It soon morphs into a classic struggle between good and evil with Satan, Jesus, the final coming and a few scenes from 'Revelation'. A heavily mutated form of catholicism is very important in the story. I saw some similarities to 'Endymion' by Dan Simmons in this, but this was released four years before Endymion.
In this series there is one big empire, the 'Terran Empire' and other smaller ones such as the one where the story takes place. The main empire has some non humans in it. They meet a ship from the main empire during this story and the main empire turns out to be quite enlightened at the time, more like that of Star Trek than Star Wars. Others have likened this story to both those series, or to Babylon 5, mainly for the technology I think. I put it closer to 'Endymion' and 'Shadow of the Torturer' than either of them because of the very strong religious themes.
This also has a lot of the sexuality of Kassidor, but only for the military. The military is granted a dispensation to ignore the usual rules of sexuality (monogamy) because many of them are sterile and they are in so much danger that they need the relief. Just about any consensual sex is permitted but the story is not porn. You are rarely in the room when it happens and body parts are not described in any detail. Whether these reasons for changing human sexuality are any more valid than changing it because of eternal youth is not for me to decide. The real reason for the sexality of Kassidor is to match the 'free love' tenet of the hippie lifestyle, a piece that did not last, as I knew it wouldn't, thus the invention of the Species Immunity Complex.
Early in the story the main character becomes a torturer as in 'Shadow of the Torturer' by Gene Wolfe. As in 'Shadow,' we aren't present at many gory and sadistic scenes, but we are told that they happened. Since that was published twelve years before this, it COULD have been taken from there, but I haven't found just when this series was actually written. It was put on line in 1992, and some updates to her web site were made as recently as 2003 and nothing since. Since she was already pretty old in 1995, I'm not surprised, she's got to be over 90 by now. Some comments about the series in other forums have hinted that this may have been written earlier and placed on line long after they were complete, as was The Second Expedition which was written in the 1970's but not placed on line until 2009 when self publishing on the internet became affordable.
The next book in the series is called 'Resurrection' and that does not seem to be available in any of the places I've seen that host her books (Manybooks and The Gutenburg Project). Others were not able to find it either. All the books I could find are free. I don't know if she had a run with a traditional publisher. This story was worth the time and it was close to getting a four star rating. It seems like it wasn't quite finished when it was put up because there are some 'outtakes' from the main narrative that are tacked onto the end.
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*** Sex = 1, Action = 4, Prose = 8
This has a novel in it, but is primarily a future history of the 'singularity,' of human simulation and the exploration of space by simulated humans. There is enough of a story in with it to illustrate the points but not much more. The story is actually a little hard to follow, at least for me, but maybe that is because I was pretty caught up in the future history aspect of the book and not paying enough attention to the action.
The similarities with the stories of Gordon's Lamp are striking but thay had to be arrived at separately because nothing of the Gordon's Lamp series was available to the general public until 2009. He has the 'digitization' of the human mind occur a century earlier than I do, but it is accomplished by the exact same technology. As of now we (humans) have no other other theory on how that could be accomplished. He thought we would have to wait an additional century for the requisite compute power, I think that will be available before the atom slicer. All in all it is close enough that writing my version of what took place on Earth and in the Solar System while Gordon's Lamp was away would not be a very unique story.
This story is also very similar to Accelerando by Charles Stross. This has more background and is not quite so confusing. The characters are a bit less developed but I didn't find them quite as off-putting as in Accelerando. In this the 'singularity' is not quite as pronounced as in Accelerando, but it is my opinion that it will be slower still, slow to the point where it won't really happen. I feel that people writing about the sigularity are missing a couple important points. 1. We are already beyond society's limit at acccepting change. Our legal, social and economic systems have not and cannot keep up with the current pace of technological progress, much less anything faster. 2. The technology is already beyond the power of the human mind to 'hold it all' and that will make it more and more difficult for humans to direct that progress, so it is likely to drop back to something more akin to natural selection. It will still move faster than evolution in mammals but not as fast as when it could be logically directed.
A large part of the book is devoted to overcoming issue #1. There are lots of details about the government actions that were taken. The plans are very logical, and the laws of physics might allow them to work, but I feel they are overly optomistic. Maybe in Italy the legislatures might be able to understand enough science to actually take them up. In this country we are fighting to allow the continued teaching of evolution in school and allow modern contraceptives to be purchased by the people who really need them. I also don't think entrenched interests worth billions and their multi-billionaire masters are going to simply step out of the way.
The other issue brought up in this book is the prospect of replacing ourselves with computers. For those who believe we are nothing more than a running program, this may be acceptible. For those of us with religious beliefs or even some scientific beliefs, the running program in the computer may have no soul, or it may be a new soul, but that soul who lay down in the atom-slicer to have his or her mind read out, that soul experiences death and is gone for good (unless re-incarnation is true). Add to these religious doubts that fact that biological life is amazingly stubborn and I think we will see plenty of human beings who balk at being read out of their bodies and becoming machines. At the end of life, yes, but not during life.
I think the only fault with the prose is due to the fact that Marco is probably not a native speaker. If that is the case, he's done very, very well to make this book as literate as it is.
The book contains an extensive bibliograhy of references on this topic.
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*** Sex = 4, Action = 5, Prose = 8
Another good story in the 'Earthbound' universe where a group of terrorists from the planet Altia attempt to release as deadly plague on the planet Lexal. In this the male lead's ex-wife redeems herself by working on the team to develop a vaccine. Some of the proofreading and some of the dialog isn't quite up to the others in the series, it is still better than average. Add to that the fact that, like the others in the series, it is low on body count makes me say that this also is well worth the time.
See reviews of others in this series, Earthbound, The Lexal Affair, Planetbound and The Lost Colony for more on this interesting universe.
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*** Sex = 3, Action = 6, Prose = 8
This fourth story in the Cassiopia and Scott Markman series is all about the Men In Black. It is almost the same premise as the movie but much more serious, quite a bit better written with one consistant plot, a strong love interest and organized opposition. Unlike MIB the movie, there are strong religious overtones. The Men in Black are lead by beings who consider themselves Angels, the heavenly Angels and not simulates as in the Gordon's Lamp series. The arch villains are fallen angels. As well as all that, there is a simulated environment in a computer game, inter-dimensional portals, aliens that are actually alien, as well as aliens that are simply humans in costume. The story is positive, the universe it is in is actually in better shape than the real world. This universe is Earth as it was at the dawn of the smart phone era, before the collapse (Great Recession), before ISIS and before most of the school shootings. DEFINITELY before Trump.
There is a love story in it and sex happens but you are never present. The affair is light hearted and fun and ends well. There is violence, but it is a reasonable amount. Important characters die and there is feeling for them. For the most part the prose is very good. There are a few passages that are a little juvenile but the proofreading is excellent. It is a full-length novel with pretty good pace. The science is hard to evaluate because some of the players are claimed to be what we think of as divinities, though it is not clear if they are supposed to be actual divine spirits or very advanced aliens. There is a time paradox and hints of the multiverse. Some parts are pure paranormal fantasy. Some of the aspects of math and computer programming in the story are a bit of a stretch. Some of the gadgetry is a little corny.
I am not a fan of the multiverse. I feel it is a desperate ploy to deny the existance of God, done because the laws of physics are too exactly 'designed' to allow our universe to exist by pure chance. One must either remove the quotes from the word designed, or plausit an infinte number of universes, each with different natural laws, to arrive at one with the laws of physics that we see. The far simpler explanation is that some thinking being adjusted the laws of physics to allow a universe in which life could develop and become complex enough to contemplate the existance of the creator.
This is on the border between three and four stars. It was entertaining, well written and well plotted. There doesn't seem to be a message, that would have made it four stars, or if the science was a little better, or if there weren't the places with slightly juvenile dialog and narration. These quibbles are minor, it's a good book and I recommend it. It was actually the first one of the series that I read, I wish it was noted in some way so I could have read them in order.
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*** Sex = 2, Action = 3, Prose = 8
A novelette about a future when baseball is used to settle international disputes instead of war. The main character is a pitcher who threw a bad pitch and lost an important game. The plot is about him trying to clear his name. The bulk of the action takes place at a formal ball where everyone has to bring a robot date. All kinds of things are revealed there, shades of 'His Robot Girlfriend' again. They do find it wasn't his pitching that was off, but I won't spoil it any more than that.
It was an entertaining story in a universe that will really never exist, but it does have something to say about robots and consciousness. It doesn't take much time to read it and it is fun.
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*** Sex = 1, Action = 5, Prose = 6
This is a story about a vast worldwide conspiracy of the super rich trying to bring back nazism in the early 21st century. One problem with near future fiction is that it doesn't take long to prove itself false. In this case the fictitous terrorist attack and the fictitious names of a few corporations are probably to make this look enough like fiction to keep the plain sedans and trenchcoated men with silenced pistols out of the author's driveway. We do not need the fiction. After the 2001 attacks the USA Patriot act was ready in less time than it would have taken a fast printer to print it out, proving beyond any shadow of a doubt that the bill was drafted and ready for action BEFORE the 9/11 attacks were carried out. This is shown in the story 'Dominion' reviewed above. All that remains to be done is find the means the Cheney/Bush administration used to get Al-Qaida to pull off the attacks. The book shows many ways he could have been manipulated into doing so with no direct contact with anyone in the administration or Haliburton. It has already come to light that the inability to thwart the attacks goes beyond pure negligence and incompetence to being down right deliberate. An offical in one of the intelligence agencies testified before congress that they knew about it but couldn't say anything because the law didn't allow his agency to operate within the country. That man should be convicted of 3000 counts of first degree murder (Wish my memory was good enough to name names). The point is we already have an example of one of our so-called public servants willing to sacrifice thousands of American lives just to get a law passed giving him more power over your life.
Almost all the future history in the story is today's facts. Our food is contaminated and often downright poisonous in the name of profits for the few. News is spun every which way, business cycles and markets are manipulated to destroy the nest-eggs of millions of working people. Privacy has been eliminated. Unlike Dominion, this story does not go into fantastic hyperbole, and that makes it all the more frightening. Most of the story takes place only a few years from now and most of it seems almost inevitable, with good reason.
What I think is unrealistic is the idea that there is a great and designed nazi conspiracy. There is absolutely no need for one. Neither is it necessary to assume all the super-rich are intrinsicly evil. But there are plenty (I know one) who are so sure they are a superior species that the rest of us are no more than beasts of burden to be used up and thrown away. They also know each other, and may make some of these plans, but a high-tech nest buried under a field in Paraguay makes a better story than random market manipulation schemes hatched on a golf course in Bermuda or a club in Moscow. No doubt many of today's multinationals maintain cyber warfare rooms where the scenes in the story could have been played out. The story clearly points toward one of them, but you will never get to read this if I mention a name.
The pure fantasy in the story is that there is an organization of little people who are going to fight back. We little people do not have the organization, the unity of purpose and especially the courage to fight back. History tells us that the common man will not rise against oppression until their babies are dying. Instead of rising up we believe the rhetoric, just as Ethan points out in the story.
The story is full of typos, grammatical errors, etc. There is an ePub error that caused a whole chapter of the story to disappear. That is of little consequence, the story is nothing, it is the catalog of government and corporate sins that this book is about. If the book were about the story, I probably would not have finished or reviewed it. If you are looking for pure entertainment, skip ahead.
Freedom and democracy is work, you must devote hours per week to it, both being informed and participating. There are thousands of people with billions of dollars each who devote every second of their lives and every thought in their minds to the acquisition of power and wealth. They are energetic, intelligent and determined and they want to take away yours and your children's freedom and prosperity more than they want life itself.
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*** Sex = 1, action = 6, prose = 9
An entertaining and light hearted tale of a young man sent out to make his fortune among the outer worlds of the Empire. In this case by 'outer' she means barely habitable and nearly uninhabited. They are lawless, every one has been genetically modified to handle the less-than-ideal environment. The story begins with a scene reminiscent of the first Harry Potter in that he is treated so badly by his father that I almost couldn't read on. But do read on, his lot gets a little better and somewhat more interesting.
The story is rather short, and the file contains previews from the other two books in the series. The three of them together will probably equal one long book, so in one sense I could say this this is not a complete book, although the first third does come to a kind of conclusion.
There is a little violence but nothing gory. There is mention of love and affection, but no actual sex. The book is suitable for younger readers. The prose is good, clear, and well proofread, a professional job all the way. The story appears to be pure entertainment with no message to deliver, although the other two books in the series might contain it. It is all set up to make a point about stealing your children's lives and then tossing them to the street.
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**** Sex = 3, action = 5, prose = 8
This is an autobiography of the first clone. With such a structure it doesn't need to have a standard plot line with a conflict, a climax and a resolution. In spite of that, it does. The conflict is between two clone-lines in the family and their fight for the future of immortality. There is also a lot about the remainder of society, the conflict cloning causes and how cloning is just the first step in a process to give us greatly increased life spans. The villain(s) in this (for he is also cloned) is one of the scariest I've ever encountered in fiction. That is not because he is an over-the-top mainiac, but because he's a realistic power-mad autocrat a-la Trump, but created before 2010. He kills, he cheats, he abuses children. He rapes his daughter, his employee's wife and uses his economic and political power to blatantly get away with it. His clone is just as bad if not worse. He gets worse as the story goes on. What gets better and better as the story goes on is the book itself. It's fairly long and many will get bored along the way. I'm glad I stayed with it.
The world this is in spans from 2032 to 2077. The story is not a good predictor of future history and shows the perils of near future sci-fi. There is hardly any space given to the smart phone, but it really wasn't clear at that time that there would be a schism in history so profound that future generations may change year 0 to the release of the first i-phone. He though a little girl's plea for peace in the middle east would have an effect. When a significant part of the population believes that the only route to salvation is to die in battle fighting for your God, peace can NEVER be acheived. In the story the USA is ahead of Europe in medicine in 2040, I got a real good laugh out of that.
There is a lot in here. He shows how child abuse damages generation after generation as it is passed on. It was the main reason the villain was the way he was. It shows the great damage cowardice can do, allowing the villain to go on unchecked for four generations. It does say something about our republican senators, they are not afraid of Trump, they WANT democracy to fail. What they are afraid of a democracy where whites are a minority. The main character's cowardice is the main reason for most of the agony in the story, and there is quite a bit. There is a part in here for string theory and the multiverse, cryofreeze and a cameo by Jesus, but that was probably a dream. There are places where you repeat part of the same time line from a different point of view, but not as extensively as in The Aluminum Quest or Tangle in the Dark. There is a lot about the desperate struggle for increased life span and a little speculation about how it would effect our society. Not as much of that as the stories of Kassidor, where it is my contention that almost nothing of our current way of life could survive. After all, educating the young and caring for the old are really the major part of government that the people care about. The whole culture of monogamy is all about raising children, as seen in Love in Exile and we will soon outlive our memories as in Pieces of Me.
The proofreading and prose is actually very good but there is a problem in the epub that converts every chapter name to 'Table of Contents'. Since the main purpose to chapter names is to give someone an idea of the story by looking at the table of contents, that does not really cause a problem. There is a normal amount of sex in the story, normal as in as much as there is in real life, not like most free sci-fi where there is less than in a Baptist hymnal. You are not present at it. There is some violence, the villain murders several people, rapes and abuses others and murders them slowly thru artificial diseases. The climax has a fairly violent scene, not as violent as the average crime drama, but significant. While I disagree with some of the postulates, I think the book was well written and thoughtful and I recommend it if you have the time.
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*** Sex = 1, action = 8, prose = 8
This is the start of a series and the remainder of the series is not free. This book is not a standalone story. The whole series is about a Cyber, which is a warrior cloned from a former great warrior, augmented both biologically and surgically and controlled by a supercomputer welded to his forehead. The original personality (soul) of the clone is still resident but has no control of the body. It can still see what's happening, feel all the pain, but of course the computer can't. in the story the supercomputer is damaged and the human soul regains control of the body.
The plot is about a young (17 Earth years) queen of a medieval country who's father dies before she is married off. In their society women have no rights and whoever can get to her first can claim her and therefore the nation she is the queen of. All the local kings are unacceptable to her so she sacrifices her entire military trying to drive them off and when that fails, tries to escape. To help her escape she is assigned the cyber as her protector, and they go off on a series of violent adventures trying to keep away from the most brutal of the kings vying for her kingdom.
The queen, though beautiful (of course) is an absolute monster, arrogant, stubborn, unable to listen to advice. She does not have any idea what the cyber is, what he is capable of and what torture she puts him thru to carry out her orders. She seems to think he is some kind of machine, but we see that she treats all commoners as if they have no feelings or humanity, a lot like many of our billionaires treat the common people today. When the human soul finally gains control of the body, he tries to explain his reality to her, and the reality beyond this backward planet but she doesn't even know the words and thinks he's speaking a foreign language, sort of like Nulf and Rianten in Vermin Rising only the queen doesn't seem to make any effort to understand. The soul in the cyber does not have total control of his body back and the computer will not let him just leave the queen, and she will never listen to reason, thus earning them continued action.
There are a few places when one or the other of them notice the physical attractiveness of each other but nothing ever comes of it. It probably does, in a later volume, but not in this one. As mentioned earlier, this ends in the middle of the story, at a sort of cliff hanger, very much designed to get you to buy later installments. If you want this kind of action, this seems to be the series for you. I haven't read any later installments, but the blubs say it continues pretty seamlessly, one adventure after another thruout the series and the queen stays with him the whole time and of course they fall in love. It's well written and proofread and probably fun if you don't mind the violence.
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*** Sex = 3, action = 5, prose = 9
Not sure whether to call this sci-fi, fantasy, paranormal or what. It's an interesting world where there are many races of humans, all derived from a common ancestor it seems, but many of the races can transform into other creatures like wereworlves and sea dragons. Some have venomous fangs but otherwise look normal. They appear to be able to interbreed, or at least they can mate with each other because the 'Devil' is a werewolf and his concubine is one with venomous fangs. The setting is lavishly well done with thick and consistant atmosphere. It's an impoverished pastoral island reminiscent of the far east in the early 20th century. The highest technology is a teletype, firearms and engines are barely known. There is both Earth native and alien life. If it was truely sci-fi, this would be a planet long after the collapse of the empire that had recovered from a long dark age, but it really doesn't seem to have the history for that.
The devil is a drug lord holding the island's underclass in an iron grip. The island is ruled by a colonial power, and another race is trying to infiltrate. The plot is the devil's concubine trying to figure out what the infiltrators are up to while trying to prevent the colonial power and the drug lord from doing more damage to her people. It's relatively convoluted and moves fast enough to keep the average person's interest. There are quite a few murders and a battle scene near the end so the violence level is moderate and some of it is gruesome but if this was a movie it would not be violent enough to be shown in multiplex theaters. There is also too much feeling for the victims for Hollywood. There was an incident in the concubine's past where she killed many werewolves that were massacring her people and she finds out later that she may not have killed the right ones but may have been manipulated by the drug lord to kill his enemies which causes her great regret.
The proofreading is excellent, I was on pg 119 before I noticed a missing word. I wasn't conscious of any other errors. That's better than most professionally published works today. There is some sex in the story but it's not explicit enough to make it unsuitable for young people. The book could have been a four star except that at one point she used a plot device that I consider cheating. With no prior notice, one of the people turns to a sea dragon to save the day. If we knew in advance he could do that it wouldn't look like she just made it up on the spot to get out of a jam. There are two others in the series (so far) and a preview of the second which seems like a continuation of the first. Since they are not free, I won't review them, but if you like this one they will probably be worth it.
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*** Sex = 4, action = 5, prose = 8
This is the first in a series and introduces the Cassell's, professor, Cassiopia and the TEL 100D robot, along with Scott Markman, a detective working for the same university the Professor does. The plot of this first novel in the series concerns a door to 'Dreamland' that the professor has created. Scott is called in to investigate his disappearance, he has gone into Dreamland and never come out. The premise is that the universe on the far side of the door is created by the subconscious of the person going thru the door. Of course it turns out that the only way to get the professor back is to chase him into Dreamland and have a series of adventures therein.
There are some inconsitencies in the premise. Some worlds created require knowledge that the player doesn't have. People may enter each other's dreams. People who are in Dreamland may have doubles who come back out and get the real person into trouble. Electronic devices, even film cameras will not work there, but the robot does. At one point he attempts to equate Dreamland with heaven. Oh if only my dreams were heavenly. The dreams of these players are not very heavenly either.
These problems are minor, it is an entertaining story and quite well written. There are a few missing words, some missing or extra suffixes and a conversation where you are not told who's speaking. You can figure it out, but it is not stated. Cassiopia and Scott come to care for each other, though they follow the romance formula and try to deny it. They do get it on in Dreamland however but he doesn't think it is really her at the time. Their affair is realistic enough for Earth humans, but not for the modified humans of Kassidor. The characters are all pretty well done. The professor is a bit of a stereotype and some of the villains are also but the main characters are quite real and realistic.
In a way Dreamland is like the simulated worlds of the Angels in the Gordon's lamp series, shown most in Tangle in the Dark except in the Gordon's Lamp simulation it is the conscious mind that directs the universe and not the subconscious. It is similar in that each may have their own universe unless they are in physical contact when going thru the door.
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*** Sex = 2, action = 5, prose = 8
The third in the Cassiopia and Scott Markman series opens with them involved in a plane crash that seems to be in the mountains of Alaska at first, you don't find out til much later it is actually in West Virginia. That can be considered realistic because even in the heavily populated south of New England people have been lost in the woods for days. What is not so realistic is the heroic effort, no let's face it, impossible effort, that Cassiopia makes to drag Scott off the mountain and out of the woods. It is reminiscent of Desa's plight in 'The Pass,' part of The Further Adventures of Desa but much more superhuman and improbable.
The remaining plot of the story is mainly about trying to get Scott out of the coma he is in because of the injuries he sustained in the plane crash. That involves going back thru the dreamland gate, a terrorist plot to blow up Washington D.C. with an atomic bomb that Ann Rogers in in the middle of and Tibetan monks on the astral plane. The story is not as violent as 'The Virtual Dead' or The Aurora City, except for the zombie attacks. Ann Roger's encounter with her father's killer is also quite violent but emotional.
Besides the superhuman climb off the mountain, there is fantasy in the issue of Scott's ring and some of the scenes with the Tibetan monks. It as not as far from reality as the average paranormal romance however. Also unlike other romance, in this one they've gotten past their self doubts and doubts of each other. It seems they have been together with some regularity now and even use the word 'love' but you are never present in the bedroom so this book is actually less sexy than the others. The prose is the same as the others, a few missing words, a few extra words but generally no problem. Three stars is 'good,' not great, but I feel it was more than worth the time. The lifelike 3D characters are probably it's strongest point. By this time you feel like you know them well.
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**** Sex = 4, action = 7, prose = 9
The second in the Earthbound Series is every bit as good as the first. This starts with some detective work in the first part of the story, but builds to quite a bit of action in the later part, even more than Antidote. Once again the settings and characters are excellent. This author understands how large planets are. You may not see every square mile of them, but he knows a planet is large enough to contain uncontacted tribes, insurgents hiding out of sight and different climates and life forms in different regions.
The plot is about a faction trying to take over one of Floran's colony planets, Lexal, using arms from Earth and backing from neighboring planets, a lot like we will face if Trump loses the next election. This was written well before the current disaster so it is not a comment on the Russian troops we could see on our streets three and a half years from now. In fact these stories don't seem to be promoting any particular message.
There are parts of the story where the characters seem a little too naive and trusting to be normal humans, more like the people of Kassidor. I still wonder how they got to be that way without modifications to human nature. The main character faces the guilt of taking a life and is at least as scarred by it as Kessil in Abomination.
Once again the prose is excellent, typos are very few, a couple 'is' that should have been 'his'. There is a little less sex than Earthbound, but some is a bit more explicit. The language is based on Esperanto and has some of the same word order as Kassidorian. That word order is chosen for being logical and precise, if not as colorful as English. Some of it is starting to get a little familiar by now. There is in this, as in the first, the culture clash of a romance between people of Floran, where sexual attitudes are more like eternals using sex as conjugation and ephemerals of Earth using sex for reproduction.
Once again, this book is highly recommended.
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**** Sex = 4, action = 5, prose = 9
The fifth and last book of the 'Earthbound' series is probably the best of all these fine works, needing only a bit better dialog to be a five star, Hugo-worthy classic. This is as well written as all of them, but beyond the story itself this one has something to say about racism, slavery and how we lie to ourselves about it. The premise is a colony planet that has been out of touch with the Florian Hedgemony for thousands of years. They would have been reinstated a thousand years ago but were blocked because they kept slaves. Now they are petitioning to set up relations and trade again and claim they have solved the slavery issue.
Their solution was to create a race of artificial beings that are supposed to be without feelings, intelligence or emotions, bred for work alone. Too bad their genetic science was not advanced enough to pull that off and they had to resort to more brutal methods to create the appearance of sub-human automatons. In this every excuse we have used in our history to justify enslavement and abuse of any other people we've encountered is trotted out and shown for what it is, self-delusion laced with willful cruelty.
It is true that other races have employed slaves, but I don't know what excuses they have used to justify what they did. It was probably just as bad, but doesn't live in our heritage where we can examine it. Slavery, here in America anyway, was always more than just unpaid labor. Unpaid, forced labor is bad enough, but to convince ourselves that the slaves are sub-human, unthinking, unfeeling beasts is far worse then that. Any of us who have ever had a pet know full well that even beasts have thoughts and feelings, to even pretend that other races of humans do not is willful cruelty.
This is such an important topic that I am surprised that I can't think of another sci-fi story that has handled it as well. There are plenty of others where slavery has been involved, but none where the dehumanization was exposed as well. In The Sex Slaves of Borlunth the actual slavery was four thousand years in the past and the 'slaves' in the story are those who are self-enslaved to outmoded notions of sexuality, those common on Earth today. There are many mainstream novels on the topic, but I'm not familiar with them. My own reading on the subject has been mainly non-fiction, either in American history or in the analysis of slavery that is still going on today in America, India, Pakistan, Africa and many other places. It has been said that there are more slaves in the United States today than there were in 1865. I've heard with my own ears that there are many in America today who still believe that other races and ethnicities are sub-human, unthinking, unfeeling monsters. That attitude is still common in some parts of the country, but espoused by a few even here in New England.
I would say, 'Read this book,' but those who will read it already agree with us and those who need to read it voted to destroy our civilization instead.
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** Sex = 0, action = 4, prose = 7
This is a very short and surface version of 'The Silmarillion' in that it lays out the legends of a fantasy world. The fantasy tale is not in here. This seems to have no relation to his 'Arcworlds' series.
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** Sex = 4, action = 2, prose = 8
This is a short story in which a guy gets a robot girlfriend and has a little trouble with it. It is very similar to and is completely overshadowed by 'His Robot Girlfriend' by Wesley Allison.
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**** Sex = 2, action = 5, prose = 9
This is primarily a detective story like The Tdeshi Quest or Antidote. Set in the Welsh borderlands of England in the present day (~2010) it features a cold case detective and a former hotshot, hard boiled detective inspector from the Met who's recently had a heart attack and been sent out for lighter duty. They are an 'Odd Couple' but come to appreciate each other. The plot begins when the local police start investigating a recent murder and come across a lot more human remains than they can handle at an old manor home and its grounds.
The Sci-fi/fantasy is similar to Narnia, a mural in that home is a portal to a magical realm of Old English history and legend. The long and troubled history of the house is a large part of the plot, and it is long and detailed enough that you might have to take notes (if your memory is as feeble as mine has become) to keep all the players straight. You also need to be pretty fluent in British (as opposed to American) English. The detectives make little sense of the case until they learn of the ancient evil attached to that house. Once they finally do, the ending is a twist that seems almost inevitable.
The story jumps back and forth in time between historical events and modern times. The setting in the past and the present is very well done and the characters are excellent. If there is any social commentary in here is it about superstition and fear of the unknown. The story is mainly entertainment, and if you like a good mystery as well as sci-fi/fantasy, it is great entertainment indeed.
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*** Sex = 2, action = 8, prose = 8
This is the second in the Cassiopia, Scott Markman series. In this the sensesuit and the tip of the organization behind it is discovered by the feds. Scott is brought in to try and infiltrate that organization. This story introduces the Ann Rogers character, an FBI agent. The sensesuit is a device that puts one in a super realistic virtual reality, covering the senses of smell, taste and touch as well as sight and sound. It contains devices that can cause one to actually be injured and killed in the game.
Of course Scott gets into great difficulty in the game, and in real life too when investigating the real world people involved. There is a lot more violence in this than in the first episode, enough so that one wonders why he would ever be stupid enough to put that suit back on. Again some of the villains are very stereotyped, mostly the minor ones. This story uses the Romance formula of excessive worry if the other feels the same and they fall victim to pride and try to pretend they aren't falling for each other. Thankfully it's only a few pages and not the hundred or more in most formula Romance.
This story is as well written and proofread as the first (The empty Door). I don't like violence so I didn't like it as much as the first but many will probably think it is better. In this Scott discovers what is really going on but the feds make him keep it under wraps.
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